World name is thebunker2021 come stop by and give me feed back
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Wrong category, put it in wotw suggestions
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My feedback is too long to put in the guestbook so I’ll put it here instead
The parkour is pretty easy, it could use more block variety tho
Also you should put soil properly, not just randomize the soil varieties (sour soil, ashen soil, normal soil, etc)
The signs need a bit of grammar and punctuation fixing
You should use signs instead of tombstones
The checkpoints are too close together, and you should use burnt background for the bg in this part. Also the chains (top left) look out of place, place them in between the spike bomb and the skulls.
The vines are too long and they don’t look good close together. Also try adding a bit of wooden background or stone background behind it. Try adding small caves in the soil, with dark fog and bats. That checkpoint in the bottom is practically impossible to reach.
Try using different backgrounds here, and add a bit of variety as most props here came from Secret Base. I recommend adding some spotlights. Add some cobwebs if you want it to look abandoned.
And last but not least the password portal part does NOT fit with the theme you’re trying to convey
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