Simple Pixel Art Feedback :)

[Mindaw]

Just made an emoticon to Pixel Vortex.

I have been learning Pixel Art for an hour a day for 3 days.

This is a normal emoticon from the game.

This is the emoticon I made (Furious Emote)

This is another furious and upset emoticon I made after discussion with @Fazeus

(Furious)

(Upset)

This is what @Fazeus made, He has been learning for a few weeks and is far better than me.

This is a pensive emote made by @Fazeus

Thanks to @Orangehairguy for some suggestions on improving our art. : D
Thanks @Ephus for the compliment.

What should Fazeus and I fix from our art? or are they good enough?

[Orangehairguy]

to mindaw only do these if you feel these would actually help I am not an expert pixel artist (obviously)

lower the eyebrows
darken the reds
remove the tears
apart from that i think its quite good for someone who has just started pixel art.

to fazeus lighten the pink on the cheeks

the hearts are amazing.

[Mindaw]

like this?

[Orangehairguy]

in my opinion thats looks better i wonder what others think

• mindaws 1st drawing
• mindaws 2nd drawing

[Mindaw]

post edit = new designs

[Fazeus]

lightened cheeks on the both pictures.

[Ephus]

I can’t do any pixel art even if I wanted to. I think yours is good!