I think the drawing looks great, you have no reason to feel ashamed. The drawing got unnecessarily made fun of, I see nothing wrong with it nor does it need “polishing”. I personally love the hair and how it whooshes around her.
So I guess the saying that artist self deprecate sometimes is true.
The reason why I don’t like it is because since April of this year I haven’t made anything and I was just practicing on my sketchbook. And it looked like I’ve improved and looking back at this, I saw some flaws in my art.
Honestly flattered you guys still liked it that it got 14 likes so, I really appreciate your replies.